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DUDE!

THATS BITCHIN'! Sick. Keep up the good work.

fishfood2021 responds:

Damn right it is.

Rags all the way

Congratulations my friend. You are an amazing piano player.
Did you play this?

I really like the phrasing especially in the beginning and around 2:00 to 2:18

I wanted to dance and wave my finger in the air the whole time.

mariofan220 responds:

Thanks.

Very well done!

I especially like the clarinet solo. I think it's clarinet at the end.

The whole piece reminds of something out of Final Fantasy 12. I enjoyed it.

I wish you luck for the future!

SinJim responds:

Thanks for the comments, I'm glad that you enjoyed this.

~SinJim

I like the feeling

Although the intro for the electric guitars doesnt mesh quite as well. I do like what they sound like but maybe make it a little more subtle?

5/5
9/10

neojim88 responds:

Thanks for the review. Yep, I agree but I just loved both parts tooo much. But as I said below I will definitely re-work it so it doesn't sound as messy. Thanks for the advice :D

I enjoy the marching feel

The 4 on the floor with the bass drum give it a slight marching feel.
I think this would be really good with a marching snare included.
A very simple marching snare pattern would fit nicely here.

5/5 and 8/10

nameless11 responds:

Haha you hear so many things in my music i dont even notice. Anyway thanks for the review/rating. Im looking forward to our collab project.

Nice

I think the synth part at 1:19 might sound better as a slightly heavy guitar with synth backing. Or maybe even wah-wahed or flanged?

Good job writing though. I would enjoy hearing this recorded!

P.S. The guy below me offered to do guitar, if you decide to record this, let me know, I've been drumming for 8 years and I would be happy to record drum parts for you.

5/5 and 9/10

HarvestThrone responds:

Yeah I agree. That was before I discovered the PWM Saw that FL has which is basically a heavier version of that synth without the phaser effect on it. I was planning on remaking it with bass added as well since there is no bass guitar in this song. Oh you're a drummer? Awesome!! I've actually been drumming for 7 years now, but I don't have my kit with me at the moment, and won't for quite some time. I am going to re-write the song, and hopefully get in touch with the guy below me for the guitar, so if you have your drumkit ready to record when we're done I would be more than happy to colaborate with you. Would you prefer me to send you the file after the guitar has been added? And thanks for reviewing and voting!!! I really appreciate it :D

Very proggy

I like it but i think you could add heavier bass and some more distorted guitar.
Not too heavy, but heavy enough.

That's just my two cents.

I like the song overall.

HarvestThrone responds:

Yeah it would probably be best to make it heavier towards the end where there is the synth melody with the (for lack of a better term) breakdown behind it. But yes, heavier it shall be. Would you want to join up with me and TwilightNecrosis for this one as well? Thanks for the review!

P.S. - I'm uploading 2 more songs today that are more recent, and the first one actually has a drum solo in it. :D

Reading a letter?

When I listen to this I envision a young woman in a dark red dress reading a letter stating that her boyfriend just died in the hospital from a gun shot wound he received while on the city streets.

I like it very much. It's great and emotive.

5/5 and 10/10

TheBellmaker responds:

Thanks for the review. I'm glad it conjures up images in your mind.

I'm thinking horror movie?

Maybe music for a stealth game.

This sounds like music from a horror movie out of the 80's. Nice feel to it.
I like how everything doesn't totally mesh together.
Nice job.

nameless11 responds:

thanks for the review man. Yeah i didnt totally know what i was going for with this song but now that i think about it this is right out of the 80s haha. Anyway thanks again.

Good but, feels a little empty.

I like the song but overall it feels a little bit empty all together. It feels like there needs to be more background in the song. Maybe a bass line or something to give it fullness?

Good job though.

Zeke30695 responds:

Thank you! Unlike the first review on this song you have given me enough information to actually lead me somewhere when I remake the song! And isn't space nothing but Emptiness? XD Oh well, I'll slap a bass line in the next version... Thanks for the helpful review! :)

Zeke30695

Been making music since 2007. Now working in video games and animation! Actually just 6 gnomes in a trench coat.

Jeffrey Brice @pumodi

Age 33

Composer

New York University

Portland, OR

Joined on 1/7/06

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